Comments:
- The template looks very awkward, especially that left section. I can't figure out why there is an h, nor can I understand why there is a thing jutting out from the image. However, I do know that the blue under the image does not look good at all. It's definitely much better than the last one, that's for sure.
- That underlined green text to highlight the "News Update" does not look good. Better organization of text needed on the main page. Stuff like "Introduction" and "News Update" could be made into an image that resembles the main title (GCNetwork), except smaller.
- Good choice of colors overall! I guess the template isn't so bad after all.
- Perhaps use an image for each of the World Conflicts sections? That's probably asking for too much, but you at least need an image for "World Conflicts"! The same goes for "Military Links", "Contact", "Free E-mail", etc.
- About the "Contact" page. What's up with having your e-mail in plain text and then afterwards putting a link saying "Click here to e-mail me." Why not just make the text "Email:
gcarl@postmark.net" a link by itself?
- "SimCity3000" section...Why bother adding "Many Cool Cities to download"? Just keep your regular link called "Cities" and that's all you need. Continuing into the "Cities" section, I don't understand why you added (Your Name Here). It makes the page look bad. As I always say, "If you don't have something, don't include it!" Since you don't have enough cities, don't add useless junk to distract the visitors.
- Now onto the "Free E-mail" section...could you get a free e-mail with
username@glomar.net? I think users would like that better than
username@gcgames.i-p.com.
- The only page that I haven't yet criticized, the "Military Links" section. Not much to mention here, except you have a "Back" link here. Since I don't see it on any of the other pages, I say stick with consistency and get rid of it.
Content: B- (81)
Layout: B (87)
Formatting*: B+ (89)
Technical: A- (92)
* Formatting includes images, colors, text, links, tables, etc.
Overall (not an average): 87%