XeonGX
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Hello everybody,
In my high school, my geography teacher told us to write a response to Al Gore's documentary.
Im not good at english, my grammar is not good.
im in ESL classes. English as a Second Language.
But i managed to write this essay.
Please read it and give me a mark out of 10.
PS: Im not doing great in geography :cry2:
The reason for this is because i want to get an idea of what i'll be getting tomorrow.
Please give me a mark, write a feedback or comemnts.
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In my high school, my geography teacher told us to write a response to Al Gore's documentary.
Im not good at english, my grammar is not good.
im in ESL classes. English as a Second Language.
But i managed to write this essay.
Please read it and give me a mark out of 10.
PS: Im not doing great in geography :cry2:
The reason for this is because i want to get an idea of what i'll be getting tomorrow.
Global Warming
Man made global warming is not a scientific fact, it is a theory based on wrong facts. Al Gore starred in the documentary film “An Inconvenient Truth”, stated that the earth’s climate is changing rapidly because us, humans are producing a lot of Carbon dioxide. He explains various methods to stop this, and to prevent this climate change.
The real fact is, that the earth’s climate had changed many times in the past, and it is absolutely normal for it to change in the future. Scientists can “predict” the climate in the future, but they can never be sure about it. Highest weather predictions accuracy is was close to %50, but they are never accurate.
“Polar bears are in great danger because of global warming.” Said Al Gore in his documentary film “An Inconvenient truth”. Polar bears have become the only advertisement on the posters of global warming, because it is believed that in the future climate change, the polar bears will not survive and they will be in great danger. The fact is that the earth’s temperature is constantly changing, there was a period where the temperature was so much warmer than today, and there was the Little Ice Age 1400-1800 where the temperature was really cold. Polar bears have survived all of these temperature changes that happened in the past, and they will defiantly survive any temperature changes in the future.
Al Gore also said that CO2 is causing the recent climate change, he showed the CO2 vs. Temperature change graph. He says that there is a pattern between the level of CO2 and Temperature, CO2 increases the earth’s temperature. Global warming is based on this evidence.
The fact is that CO2 is not a pollutant, and it is only %0.045 of earth’s atmosphere. Even if global warming was caused by CO2, we can’t do much about it, because not only humans produce CO2. Volcanoes produce more CO2 than all the factories on earth. The greatest amount of CO2 comes from the oceans. Humans only produce so little of the %0.045 CO2 that exists in the atmosphere. If CO2 is not causing the climate change, than what does? The answer is, the sun is causing the earth to warm. The sun has been burning more brightly than it did 1000 years ago, and this causes the earth’s temperature to get warmer.
The CO2 level raised before cars were invented. During the post war economic boom CO2 level decreased even though that cars and all kinds of electrical devices were invented and being used.
Global warming is happening, but it is not man-made. Humans did not cause global warming, and cannot prevent it happening. Man made global warming is a theory based on wrong facts, and wrong statistics, and it is wrong. The sun has changed earth’s climate in the past, and it will change it in the future. No CO2 is involved.
Please give me a mark, write a feedback or comemnts.
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As$hole said:yo man dis essay sucks you suck i can rite better dan dis shyt
Member said:I think your points are weak, and I think you should improve your writing skills.
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