Quivira Media v2: Io... Review?

[quivira]

Hey everyone,
I've been reviewing a bunch of people's sites here, and I noticed that I would need to be reviewed too :lol:
I currently only have a screenshot of it (well, with me at the library right now.) I don't know if FWS will let me link a screenshot and not the acutal document, but here it is:
http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/5372/qmnew0rk.png
Thanks a lot, everyone!

EDIT1: FreeWebspace isn't abbreviated "FW"?

 

[Johnson]

It looks too complicated, poor choice of colors and fonts.

 

[quivira]

It looks too complicated, poor choice of colors and fonts.

Thanks for input. I can't figure out what font to use in the header (in "quiviramedia")... got any suggestions?

Thanks!

 

[antispyware]

i think it needs some more editing.
you may center everything under "shuai's notes repository"
i dont understand the language.
anyhow, you may place a description/introduction about the site and its purpose at the beginning of the site if not placed already.

 

[quivira]

i think it needs some more editing.
you may center everything under "shuai's notes repository"
i dont understand the language.
anyhow, you may place a description/introduction about the site and its purpose at the beginning of the site if not placed already.

Thanks for input. That's a good idea - I have to start surfing some webdesign sites.

Thanks for your suggestions!

 

[Paul White]

EDIT1: FreeWebspace isn't abbreviated "FW"?

Nope, its FWS to most.

I think that you need a new header foint for sure. Too bad, I used to have like 16000 extra fonts! Also, I would add a brief overview between the project examples and the information at the bottom.

 

[quivira]

Nope, its FWS to most.

I think that you need a new header foint for sure. Too bad, I used to have like 16000 extra fonts! Also, I would add a brief overview between the project examples and the information at the bottom.

Thanks for input. I was the one who had the 16000 extra fonts, remember? I need a professional font - but not Myriad, since I'm kinda getting bored of Myriad. I'm looking at Costa PTF (or something), or the Flock font. It looks pretty fresh, so I might use that.

Wait, that thing costs way too much. Never mind.

I'm ditching this mockup of Io. Can't see how it may become awesome.

Thanks for input, everyone!

 

[iBrightDev]

hmmm, i dont like the color choice or the layout very much.

 

[quivira]

hmmm, i dont like the color choice or the layout very much.

Me neither. Authority dudes, please close this. This mockup sucks.